Let's Build A Life Together[? ] …… [wife's Request; Bonding; Longish; Personal] Comments
My dear wife has requested that I write this poem,
and though many may say 'you can't', I'll show ‘em!
I had my doubts about the task at first, I'll admit,
but to admit I can't rise to the challenge, I'll not submit.
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Hello poet Bri. A very full and detailed account of a life built together, Bravo! Loyd
Al in all, with you I am content, though at times we do each resent This is one of your best poems Bri....! Really enjoyed it! I admire the candour with which you explain your togetherness, though some exaggerations may be there! The realistic ending of the poem adds to its innate beauty! Award you top marks!
ok, maybe my instead of mine............in the hair-cutting line. bri :)
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7/26/2025 7:42:08 AM # 1.0.0
A very entertaining and insightful write Bri with great rhythm and superb rhyming. Very interesting and just shows opposites attract and can make a really good life together! Great write Bri!