Saturday, March 15, 2008

Let's Bring Down The Wall Between Us Comments

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We are blood relations and yet there's a big wall between us,
We can't get through; we choose not to get through,
The wall is growing not because it has to - but a wish
A wish that somehow this wall will unravel itself, a wishful thinking;
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Jona PoloRamirez
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Howard Johnson 15 March 2008

Wow this is excellent, A very solid write from start to finish, Thank yo ufor letting me read, Jona.

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Dislocated Heart 15 March 2008

i like your title, and very nicely writen piece. may one day, you and your friend/family member be back and living happy together once again.

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