Time is never same
It keeps on changing
So is the relationships.
Once placed with respect
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congratulation on being #one in India great most deserving Geetha
Let's wander in wilderness like a nomad! ! ! A good poem! ! !
So true the pain of broken relationships leaves a deep and permanent scar that never heals! I really enjoyed this original and great write!
Wonderful! The train departed would sure to come back. But the thread tied cannot hide the knot. People buy a new mirror, a new colourful thread and try a new relationship. But the excellence of virtue of the heroine in this poem lies in her preference to be strangers if she meets that man who shattered her dreams of a happy life. Unusual theme/central idea makes the poem stand apart from the rest. *****
Even if broken thread tied together Will always show a knot in it. it shows your skill as an observer.
This is great... Poetically and emotionally delivered. You are a goddess of pen. Kudos, bravo. Geetha jayakumar.
It was strange it was there, and it's even stranger it's gone and life is stranger than fiction....Geetha.......this is a very good piece, loved its theme of being strangers and lead life remaining strangers.......well composed....10