I'm not writing this cos I'm a dreamer
It's for a cause to throw some beamer
If you read this do think once, may be twice
If you want peace, we need to organize
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This is so true we all need to stand up and be counted against these evil people in our society by showing our outrage and shunning these evil thugs, they should be executed. Brilliant write! !
wow....how true and how brilliantly put in front of readers...bravo and yes we shall we must act rebel to make this place better to live to feel....job well done sir
Thank you all for reading and leaving genuine feedback. Especially Veeraiyah and Viks, thanks for pointing out my potholes, It's gonna help me hone my skills and be better, and this is what we are here for. All suggestions are vital, be it positive or negative.
We don't have to rebels, but we have to behave accordingly not to pollute the earth! any way Good attempt!
Its a good thought with content but you could have done this better.... This poem has gone literal... It could have been more abstract... Sorry if I overstepped my limits....
grt....poem.........its not a mere poem......it really shakes ones heart.......
By raising voice you have told so many things, thanks. Please read my poems and say something.