Monday, January 14, 2013

Let's Act Rebel Comments

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I'm not writing this cos I'm a dreamer
It's for a cause to throw some beamer
If you read this do think once, may be twice
If you want peace, we need to organize
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Gajanan Mishra 12 January 2015

By raising voice you have told so many things, thanks. Please read my poems and say something.

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Hazel Durham 16 January 2013

This is so true we all need to stand up and be counted against these evil people in our society by showing our outrage and shunning these evil thugs, they should be executed. Brilliant write! !

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Payal Parande 15 January 2013

wow....how true and how brilliantly put in front of readers...bravo and yes we shall we must act rebel to make this place better to live to feel....job well done sir

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Kishor Pathak 14 January 2013

Thank you all for reading and leaving genuine feedback. Especially Veeraiyah and Viks, thanks for pointing out my potholes, It's gonna help me hone my skills and be better, and this is what we are here for. All suggestions are vital, be it positive or negative.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 January 2013

We don't have to rebels, but we have to behave accordingly not to pollute the earth! any way Good attempt!

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Vikrant Jog 14 January 2013

Its a good thought with content but you could have done this better.... This poem has gone literal... It could have been more abstract... Sorry if I overstepped my limits....

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Neetha Sasidharan 14 January 2013

grt....poem.........its not a mere poem......it really shakes ones heart.......

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