Friday, August 15, 2008

Let Our Dreams Fly Comments

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I look in your eyes so sad so blue
Whisper to your ears 'can I hug you'
You lay your head on my shoulder
Then we started to sway over
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Manonton Dalan
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Vilma Xelin 26 August 2008

wow... this is trully my favorite...so tender, so romantic... I could feel your shoulder on my cheek! I mean it!

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Pied Piper Berry 22 August 2008

Beautifully penned. An embrace is one of the most endearing gestures between two people. Thank you. I enjoyed reading your poem

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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