Friday, February 6, 2009

Let Not The Sun Comments

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Let not the sun, go down on today,
hear my prayer Lord, hear my Prayer.
For tonight the shadows will come
and all that is mine will be gone.
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Laurie hill
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Such a flowing and pleading poem Laurie. It is beautifully written and crafted. 10 Karin Anderson

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Anita Wisniewska 04 May 2009

very effective and well written, reads like a classical poem.

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