When the mind is set without fear
When the word speaks without lie
When the heart is free from dirt
When the knowledge earns without waste
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Birds of love take to the blue skies, man and man gets bound in humane ties, truth will rise and triumph over lies, into such beautiful dawn of freedom.....let ur country awake! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
very nice poem written on a sensitive issue. thanks for sharing.
an international anthem...a wise prayer to live by...a 10+ for this univeral appeal
this is a very nice poem, when i saw that you are living in sri lanka, i can imagine your poems with those people who are suffering there.. its a very sad situation that is prevailing in sri lanka.. i too wish that people get a freedom from brutal attacks..
A very conscious poem of our current world's predicament!
i like this one.... well penned.... it reminds me of a prayer we used to recite in school.... good job....
when the eyes of sleeping giant are wide open and the ears of mankind are close will there be any development? or terrorism will always continue...
vow! beautiful.it could well be your national anthem voted10 surya
wonderful abstract poem, well written, lovely to read....................10++++++
By hook or by crook we v achieved peace finally...it s time to spread love...and make this country the garden of eden where tiger and lion will work hand to hand...passionately and lovingly as ever, , ,
This poem is by the one, the only, Rabindranath Tagore.
I should have said based on. I can see that you have adapted it but I think it's inspiration should be credited.