Tuesday, October 19, 2004

Let My Country Awake.............. Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the mind is set without fear
When the word speaks without lie
When the heart is free from dirt
When the knowledge earns without waste
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Eilidh St John 28 November 2018

This poem is by the one, the only, Rabindranath Tagore.

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Eilidh St John 28 November 2018

I should have said based on. I can see that you have adapted it but I think it's inspiration should be credited.

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Eyan Desir 07 October 2009

Good write.......well said 10 points

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Seema Aarella 18 September 2009

Birds of love take to the blue skies, man and man gets bound in humane ties, truth will rise and triumph over lies, into such beautiful dawn of freedom.....let ur country awake! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Seema Chowdhury 17 September 2009

very nice poem written on a sensitive issue. thanks for sharing.

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Chitra - 17 September 2009

an international anthem...a wise prayer to live by...a 10+ for this univeral appeal

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 14 September 2009

this is a very nice poem, when i saw that you are living in sri lanka, i can imagine your poems with those people who are suffering there.. its a very sad situation that is prevailing in sri lanka.. i too wish that people get a freedom from brutal attacks..

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 12 September 2009

A very conscious poem of our current world's predicament!

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there is a poet in me! 12 September 2009

i like this one.... well penned.... it reminds me of a prayer we used to recite in school.... good job....

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Lady Grace 12 September 2009

when the eyes of sleeping giant are wide open and the ears of mankind are close will there be any development? or terrorism will always continue...

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Surya . 12 September 2009

vow! beautiful.it could well be your national anthem voted10 surya

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Marieta Maglas 08 September 2009

wonderful abstract poem, well written, lovely to read....................10++++++

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lovely tagorian poem...an explainative extension

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premji premji 02 July 2009

ravi, you are a 'tagore'an!

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Shashendra Amalshan 19 May 2009

By hook or by crook we v achieved peace finally...it s time to spread love...and make this country the garden of eden where tiger and lion will work hand to hand...passionately and lovingly as ever, , ,

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