Friday, April 19, 2019

Let Me Worship In Your Altar Comments

Rating: 2.5

Time is a commodity
Short in supply
I can't wait anylonger
That's why I want to worship
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Raimi Babatunde
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Mahtab Bangalee 25 June 2019

You smiled back saying If you really want to worship Put a ring on it That I be yours and you be mine A risk I am willing to take Till death do us part ........./// beautiful poetic expression; lovely written

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Jane Campion 23 June 2019

Loved the humor in your poem.

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Oluwatosin Thomas 19 April 2019

Permission to blog this pls

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Raimi Babatunde 21 April 2019

Thanks. Pls. go ahead with necessary credit.

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Thomas Oluwatosin 19 April 2019

This is indeed poetry, the title never reaveled it's content. i had a different view concerning the topic, but reading it i found another meaning. indeed there is a vast difference between the readers mind and the witer's mind. indeed u deserve a medal, you nailed it. Thumbs up

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Raimi Babatunde 21 April 2019

Thanks Tosin, your words inspire me....

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