Let Me Weep. Comments

a touching warm poem with compassionated feelings..and i can weep with you

this is a very inspiring write..very touching

'Let me sleep The sleep of those In whose eyes Float clouds and birds Rivers flow Yet they remain parched. ................... Let me weep! Let me sleep! ' Naseer

A very moving commentary, Fay. You said it very well. Ron

Very touching. May our tears be translated into prayers for a better and brighter world. Blessings to you from, Sandra

this fay is reflective of the cries i shed daily.........

Let me weep with the world as it, sighing Stumbles along in painful hurt, always... oh it is like that only.. we got to change ourselves... thought sodeep expressed... lovely presentation. read mine don't kill me, emotional bursts and dramland and crynot... mainly read

nice one Fay! very expressive....I love the ending...yeah we need to feel even the painful things that'll come to our lives so that we will appreciate the happiness and sweetness of life.. It's good to have rain so that we'll be able to wish for a new sun with kaleidoscopic rainbow....10 from your lovely fella

Outstanding piece Fay, your heart written words sit in the heart of the reader..feeling your every tear.....this is beautifully touching....thank you for the share of this amazingly expressed piece

Between our birth and our demise and we could see ourselves, through another's eyes would truth overcome the lies and be aware of humanities cries