Let me first venture into the sea
To be just washed ashore later
And I will feel you breathing life unto me
After you have come in search for me.
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I wonder what is engraved on that pendant.....! Like the mysterious message encoded, this poem written in your mysterious style speaks of a mysterious love. Enjoyed!
A beautiful and very creative write. Mermaids are always sure to enchant the reader!
A touch of mystery and allure surrounds your loved one, she appears to be an enigma, you have more questions than answers about her. The revealing lines And my love will bloom unto a rose With no more thorns please...... It is an exquisite portrayal of your loved one that fascinates and intrigues you! !
Beautiful romantic poem filled with mystery. Quiet interesting lines... Is it possible to venture into sea, just to be washed later...... .....And my love will bloom unto a rose ....With thorns no more please....Loved reading it.