Sunday, June 29, 2014

Let Me Venture Into The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me first venture into the sea
To be just washed ashore later
And I will feel you breathing life unto me
After you have come in search for me.
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Beautiful romantic poem filled with mystery. Quiet interesting lines... Is it possible to venture into sea, just to be washed later...... .....And my love will bloom unto a rose ....With thorns no more please....Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 30 June 2014

I wonder what is engraved on that pendant.....! Like the mysterious message encoded, this poem written in your mysterious style speaks of a mysterious love. Enjoyed!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 June 2014

lovely romantic write, with a wonderful end.

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Colleen Courtney 29 June 2014

A beautiful and very creative write. Mermaids are always sure to enchant the reader!

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Hazel Durham 29 June 2014

A touch of mystery and allure surrounds your loved one, she appears to be an enigma, you have more questions than answers about her. The revealing lines And my love will bloom unto a rose With no more thorns please...... It is an exquisite portrayal of your loved one that fascinates and intrigues you! !

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