Wednesday, November 18, 2015

Let Me Test Am I Alive Comments

Rating: 5.0

Please don't ignore.
You are looking in pains,
I see tears in your eyes,
Your face is red with strains!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Musawir Raakh 19 November 2015

Yes, you are alive, until you keep on writing wonderfully,

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Kelly Kurt 19 November 2015

To empathize with another's plight is proof of life. Thanks, Akhtar

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Khalid Saifullah 18 November 2015

Really amazing poem........................................................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2015

Very fantastic expression brings emotion in mind of many. Sharing this tearful story is definitely thought provoking. Amazing to have test of living mood of life. Wise sharing...10

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M Asim Nehal 18 November 2015

let it cut my heart into so many pieces, let it melt the pieces into hot white blood, let me see whether my eyes bleed for you, or not, Nicely written poem, ...Janab, Amusing 10+++

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