Friday, June 29, 2012

Let Me Take You There Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take me to a place
Where all my sufferings end,
Where there are no people
Whose broken hearts are to be mend.
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Sawan Dhyani
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Akanksha Kukreti 07 February 2021

Lovely 💕

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Neela Nath Das 26 March 2014

Aa chalke tujhe me leke cholu ak aise gaganke tale....................Like this.So lovely!

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Sawan Dhyani 08 August 2012

Thanks a lot. I'll be improving I guess.

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Valsa George 06 August 2012

A lovely poem...... flowing with ease and rhythm..... You young talent, you have many more rungs in the ladder to climb! ! Wish you all the best and thanks for the nice comment!

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