Let Me Sleep Comments

When you sleep you rest with a heart so content having done what you had set out to for the day. Having given your love and the best you could you then want to rest. A beautiful write. I enjoyed it. Thank you for all your poems!

A farcical, we are the silent...we are dreaming sleeping beautiful poem Assalam o alaikum

Really I m feeling tired too. I need eternal rest. I hope i have completed my all jobs. So let me sleep.

A very impressive poem.

A great poem, a thoughtful poem, very well wrote.

h! Short sightedness, Your apparent charms, Have been hypnotizing, Like an old deadly witch, Taking showers of fire, In the ocean of blood, ...............future thoughts always perplex our brain.......nice

I am afraid of future, my soul is crying because everywhere there is stress and tension. Let me sleep because only sleep is equal and peaceful to all human beings and all creatures. During sleep only they do not feel the difference between them forget every external thing of this material world. Sleep is equally felt pleasantness for all creatures. Well described the present situation of a person and his search for peace through let me sleep. Excellent work.

The pouring down of frustrated thoughts and the deluge of longings and emotions make this poem an outstanding piece! A man who has seen enough of fair life is worried at the phase of change the world now takes and wishes to exit out from this world! I give it a10 (But if he is given a red rose, I am sure he will go dancing round his beloved, musing..... 'How sweet this world.... let us drink from this cup of joy...'! ! !)