One day from a far empire
you came to my lonesome thoughts
I was totally sedated by your eloquence.
Now you, my companion of all my invisible emotions.
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I myself became the shebang of your opus the songs you playing are melodious, ............................ Lotus of love opens up by touch of sparking warmth Magnum opus of creation spackles of iridescence Dream slowly melts into oceanic dream of blue Rocked up pine over peaks of snow beacons to glow.............oh what a songs of love by precision wrought by ingenuity through imagery making reader to meander beyond, thought provoking,10+++++, thanks for sharing
xlent. I told u once you possess an extraordinary talent. u have to recognize it. well versed. great write.
You are a maestro as you colorfully express the most honest desires. Beautifully played my dear!
Oh! Fifer comest thou with thine fife unto my life: For shall I forget in thy song, all my heart's strife! 'Tis a good poem, , , I like it very much: : : : Top marks! ! !
I fully agree with the rest of the guys, it is a very imaginative and emotionally penned write! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Romeo from NYC...
good one.. filled with pure imagination with subtle emotions ... liked it
Breathtaking imagery and a wonderfully written love poem Sajna, excellent work.
Love and its power wields its strength thru this poem so eloquently giving the reader knowledge it comes from the heart, indeed sing along...regards