Sunday, June 26, 2016

Let Me Sail Into Your Eyes Deep Comments

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My oars are broken, and the tide is high.
And the journey is long, and far is the shore.
In the sea's winding corridors I lost my cry.
Like a lion, the waves madly roar
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Istabraq Al Ahmadi
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 May 2019

So let me sail into your eyes deep, then melt in them, sink and sleep in the crystal like calmness of divine, to let your thoughts mingle with mine. just your love o lover poet ur wife will be happy

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 May 2019

Like a lion, the waves madly roar At my little boat that alone was left, And of hope was bleakly bereft. that's all humans do o dear upcoming poet ur have essence

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Fabrizio Frosini 04 July 2016

you are a very good poet, Istabraq. You've invited me to read one of your poem. Indeed, I've read all the 9 poems you've posted here up to now, with their political and ethical themes interwoven. All of them very well penned. But this one is only full of love.. '' let me sail into your eyes deep ''.. really a beautiful song of love for your wife..

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Thanks a lot Dr. Fabrizio. I am grateful to you for your support and tenderness.

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Istabraq Al Ahmadi 26 June 2016

This poem was inspired by my love to my wife.

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