Wednesday, November 19, 2014

Let Me Sail Away Forever Comments

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Let me sail away forever,
Let me cast off from the shore,
Let the swirling mists engulf me,
Till reality rules no more,
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Clive Blake
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Roseann Shawiak 19 November 2014

An excellent poem, perfect rhythm throughout. Imagery is excellent, you have described it all uniquely, so much so that I can see everything as you describe it in my mind. Loved this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 November 2014

Let Me Sail Away Forever- tranquility - own way to live - pleasure and pain reason not known well tried - could you please elaborate this to me thanks

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