Sunday, March 19, 2017

Let Me Pretend Comments

Rating: 5.0

Still, waters, moon-reflected
Let me swim through you
And drown my sins in their sorrow
In their darkness, I have swum
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Mark Heathcote
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 March 2017

Still sliver moon-light is nicely reflected forming motivational imagery here and mind takes interest to swim more in such water. In this darkness we need to wash sins and sorrows to get calmness of pure life and gaining light of wisdom. One can trust in life of self. The moonlight here is serene in these tranquil waters. This scene announces us to dream here and pretend. An excellent poem is very beautifully crafted....10

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Mark Heathcote 26 March 2017

Thank you, Kumarmani Mahakul glad you like it sir many thanks for the read and comment it's much appreciated.

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