Thursday, February 6, 2014

Let Me Not Forget Comments

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Let me not forget
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Abiding by the rule of laws-
Of this mortal life,
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 31 March 2014

Desires in life are fickle, unable to be fulfilled, yet we run after them as if they were our gods. Costing us our selves as we are finally steeped in saddened silence, having lost all purpose in life. Being mere mortals, not forgetting that fact and having to say good bye to the only world we've ever known. Good one, Amitava. RoseAnn

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Valsa George 08 February 2014

The end note adds more to the perspective of your life.... Yes, we lose the essence of life in the holocaust of desires! The thought that oneday we have to leave the world and go will give a better orientation to our life and help us shift our priorities! Enjoyed! !

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Soulful Heart 07 February 2014

bliss in the solitude of silence...the sublimity of silence can be known only by a poet.........

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 February 2014

Beautiful poem from your pen...Very true said one cannot forget that life is mortal. But as long as we are alive we have to fill ourselves with an aura of positive thoughts. I often get depressed feelings in mind. Some days are too tough to pass...But have to move on... Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. Loved reading it.

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