Thursday, January 10, 2013

Let Me Not Comments

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Let me not be in oblivion drowned
But in sweet sorrow of thy love be bound
Thou gone far faraway, taken
My heart, my hope and all in hand
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Faezeh Motavallian
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Sina Farajzadeh 21 March 2013

Hi. It's very well written. I like the emotion and its ideas. Who is the Musician? God? Cruel Life? Destiny? Whatever. It's so nice that you share your feelings with us. Dear Faezeh when I read this poem I found some relations of it with one of my poems, Dears Die. I'd be glad to see you read that and comment on it. By the way, what's your age and city? Thanks.

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Poetheart Morgan 11 March 2013

WOW! How much passion in his words. I dance very well! !

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