Let Me Love You Comments

YOU YOUNG GAL are so young.I can only offer you my nimble fingers... a heart of gold you already have... To you I see so many are sold a ''swayamvar''... you may have to hold call me I will be judge my young bird for thee oldy that I be granpaly may be....... .o speak not poet have you not read me yet speak not okay but read me yes no not not once i came across a poet who was very negative he said what is is not what is not is not what we have is not what we have not is not so he went about in knots then finally i old him SPEAK NOT COZ WHAT YOU SPEAK IS NAUGHT HE silenced but added Silence me not

I've drowned myself a thousand times In the ocean of your love On the petals of your lusty lips beautiful garden so pure feeling is so divine lovely lines of love.. the reader feels like jumping into the ocean of love to dive for the pearl . great images, symbols of love. Thank you for this nice poem tony

A nice poetic imagination, Anamika. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Great love poem with beautiful imagery.

Lovely poem Anamika. I specially loved the first four lines.