Tuesday, August 9, 2011

Let Me Love Somebody Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do I turn away
When someone shows they care

It's been a long time
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Dave Alan Walker
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Louis Kasatkin 12 January 2012

With this and some of your other work, I get the impression that they ought to be performed livee with acoustic guitar? poems after all are songs without music and vice versa?

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Patti Masterman 11 November 2011

Such strong emotion here, it kind of tears at one. I have known people like you describe here, and because I am made with a strong desire to be needed and to love, not being able to love and comfort someone is always the worst cross for me to bear, I've found.

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Crimson Love 09 November 2011

Beautiful poem! the emptiness of a heart is sometimes unbearable. but in time love shall find us all. :) spledid write!

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Jacqui Broad 08 October 2011

Didn't expect this honest introspection...upon reading it, one just want to reach out and smooth away the frown...

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Bianca F. 22 September 2011

I love this poem, I can really relate to everything you wrote. I especially like the lines 'Tears of my life fall' and 'Fears of my life hide away'. Very beautiful.

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Stefanie Fontker 16 September 2011

Your heart is not made of stone, of this I'm sure. Beautiful poetry, I expect no less from you.

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

Very appreciable flow of poetry here..well done

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Eric Cockrell 23 August 2011

often the hardest thing to accept is unconditional love.... you write from the heart here... well done!

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