Let Me Live Long Comments
The mind binds me in the golden cage of mirage
Running I'm on the sandy shore of timing race
The balmy sea breeze of poems vibrate the thought
Losing I'm slowly all in the gyre of an epidemic pot
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Excellent poem. I liked: Let me live, let me live long with you out of the pestilence
Let me live, let me live long with you out of the pestilence coming out fro the golden cage of mirage
There is a saying in the Holy Bible: Man proposes, but God disposes.Thank you for sharing your prettiest composed poem, dear Mahtab!
A very impressive poem to read. Beautiful metaphors, an exciting concluding last line, that is: Only togetherness of love can save from bad side-glance. Yes, one is not strong enough, but two in based upon true love will stand the test of time and able to conquer all challenges in life.
The last lines reveal their power, in this age of plague, the fight for life becomes more fragile. A beautiful poem!
The closing stanza is the best. To weave that truth you so paradoxical placed mind binding golden cage. Do exotically penned. Beautiful. Sir.
The balmy sea breeze of poems vibrate the thought Losing I'm slowly all in the gyre of an epidemic pot. Captivating lines, super imagery and beaytiful etaphor
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It Touches me and my world.Beautifull