Let Me Live In This Garment Comments

Lovely and philosophical presentation of your thoughts. Had to read and re-read this poem to fathom the depth of your thoughts. However, I could not reconcile the meaning of I may feel like living in your garment [4th stanza] with contents of 6th stanza referring to.... a fatherless God a decidedly atheist assertion.

A Beautiful poem with many captivating lines..... The garment looks so fine and silky You have never let me down I say No choice for garment, one has to accept as it is, along with the price it is tagged. These above lines indicate the positivity, not only accepting the garment as it is but loved wearing it too. Optimistic flow of words. Different concept and enjoyed reading it.

You wrote it so simply and flawlessly. a beautiful concept. lovely.

Safety and comfort in your new garment as you find freedom for your spirit and soul to release their joy as you battle with your ego for peace! Deep and so beautifully written!

Perceptions most of the times proves to be wrong before actually getting into the real situation. Philosophical read Sir! I learned to smile! Changed perception! Wonderfully written Sir.

Into the attire of narrow dimensions As I jump and somehow hide myself within I forget to breathe for a while When you are forced against your will to be casted in some other mould, initially your soul will rebel.... but you have to some how adapt to it.... I can sense your suffocation in each line! But as you say when you allow your ego to escape through the small gaps, I am sure, you'll feel happier than before and when you train your lips to smile at the oddities of life and stop rebelling at them, you 'll be able to reinvent your human hood! Too deep a write for me to explicate! A 10

As I jump and somehow hide myself within I forget to breathe for a while But again I smile and feel my style of living in this universe and realize what I am. Beautifully presented poem shared really. Nice job on sharing.