Sunday, September 8, 2013

Let Me Lie Comments

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Let me lie in my bath
Let me soak in the heat
From the tip of my head
To the toes of my feet.
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John Carter Brown
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Noreen Carden 10 September 2013

Hi John its great to come across a little gem like this it made me smile i showed it to my son he said that s my kind of poetry its always good to smile

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Gabhriel Londe 10 September 2013

You can't take poetry too seriously. This made me laugh, thanks :)

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Lorraine Colon 08 September 2013

I was so seriously reading this - and then I came to the last stanza! I laughed out loud. You made my day. Great poem!

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