Let me keep floating
Like a leaf in a stream
Let me sleep after my work
And breathe smooth and dream
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You poems are so touching and emotional, dear Poet. Loved it. Top marks + to my favourite
Let me keep floating like a stream.....sleep and dream.......A wonderful poem dear Anil ji.
You want to go far is reflected with beautifully penned poem.
To welcome death, the inevitable, needs a lot of mental preparedness. Nice one, Anilji
Loved the concept of up and down swing reflected in this wonderful poem. Many poets write good poems but fail to put a catchy title...loved the poem in terms of its title, structure, flow, lovely imagination in creative parlance, and the essence of this magnificent poem in its totality....excellent!
I can feel the human tendency to live longer and longer to enjoy life and then take a leave, a leave of death to embrace peace
Dr Swain's very positive constructive criticism says it all...does a great service to a magnificent poem. Excellent work, Poet Panda!