Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Let Me Hide You Comments

Rating: 2.2

Let me hide you in my heart
Allow no one to see you apart from me...
Will love you my love more than my life
I swear on myself to make you believe....
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Rohit Sharma
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An all protecting, overshadowing, powerful love. Loved the emotion and expression of the write. Undying love..priceless! Lovely; D

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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2010

Oh no...i have no word anymore for u Rohit, yeah because u definitely very good poet that can splash us with ur deep emotion and now u let us wet...wet with love and calming: D... i love the way u chain the lines and stanzas...but what make it more valuable is...because your deepest, Purest heart writing

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Aastha Uppal 02 July 2010

plainly explains the possesiveness of a lover.. which usually ends up in a demanding relationship which some want and others dont.. but nicely worked out well sorted feelings and nicely put up.. good one

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Anita Trivedi 29 June 2010

sooooooo Beautiful........ All girls have this dream that her partner love her soo much....... you have written so wellllllllllll

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Gita Ashok 11 June 2010

One more gem from your anthology here! I'm totally speechless!

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Rohit Sharma

Rohit Sharma

Amritsar, India
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