Tuesday, June 8, 2004

Let Me Have... Comments

Rating: 3.5

I wanna live
But not this life
Let me eat
Just not that food
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Ashley Olson
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Sandra Osborne 28 February 2005

Excellent form, craft. I loved the ending and all the way through.10+

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Andrew Corrao 27 September 2004

I love poetry and this was wonderful! The love and soul that went in to it was very moving. I give it 4 stars, and two thumbs up love, Andrew

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Ashley Olson

Ashley Olson

Torrington, CT
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