Friday, July 21, 2017

Let Me Go To City Market Comments

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Let me go to city market,
To bring grocery items for today,
Coarse flour of wheat is necessary
Spending money I shall buy.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Caleb Wiggins 05 November 2020

Sometimes I visit our nearby city market. It remains rush. Due to COVID we are not going there.

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Michael Walker 01 July 2020

Very effective refrain of 'Let me go to market' in the first, third and fourth stanzas. To go to the market with money to spend opens up the poem to very wide possibilities. There are essential groceries to buy-like flour and curry-but also it is a place to talk to friends. 'I shall observe in market with vision'. I want to go to the market now.

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Frank Davis, Sr. 15 September 2018

Insightful poem. Enjoyed the enthusiasm!

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Muzahidul Reza 15 December 2017

Let me go to city market, wonderful expression, thanks for sharing,10

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Muzahidul Reza 15 December 2017

Market is our social center where we gather for our needs, wonderful writing,10

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 November 2017

Muse! ! To the market. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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