Thursday, December 5, 2013

Let Me Go Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is this hold you have on me,
Did you cast a spell with your charms?
I freeze when I try to run from you,
And I melt at the thought of your arms
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Lora Colon
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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 September 2016

A beautiful life song. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Bri Edwards 09 March 2016

I love the last line. .....it is soooooo…………”Lora”. or is it humor? soooooooooooo unlike Lora! Your heart is hereby freed at last. The spell I threw at you is now UN-cast. You may now resume stewing about your past, and sulk and cry ….while I go out and have a blast! ! bri :) I hope it was humor, but I doubt it.

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David Lessard 05 December 2013

Well thought out poem of love's inescapable hold on another.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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