Monday, August 14, 2006

Let Me Go Comments

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when your soul is lost
and it cries out for help
if no one tries to save you
do they still care
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lala rain
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Nimal Dunuhinga 20 August 2006

Beautiful. Lala when let go the attachments the soul will be more free?

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Beautifully written. You threw me a bit at the end with the twist but it was a good effect. Esra Sloblock

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Scarlet Red 14 August 2006

by the way the poem goes, it is you who doesnt want to let go of him... anyways, nice piece here.. goodluck on your lovelife =)

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