I've gotten to know you, very well,
And so you say, 'Why must you go? '
I know you love me dearly,
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Dee, I am sure that you believed that when you wrote it! Flip it over though! If a guy said that to you, what would you think? And how did that work out? - - - I thought so! That ranks right up there with 'It just happenned '... when people cheat! Take some damned responsibility for what you do! Yea! , me either!
dee very catching, so i hope you don't mind me voting 10 emilyxxx
you speak the truth. it's sad to walk away to get to know yourself, but it is imperative. brilliant poem.
This, DD, is an exquisite mode of expressing a fundamental truth. Well done.
a tough choice to make amazingly put down in words.. superb.. krishna
WELL DONE DEE, AS PER USUAL...HAVEN'T WE ALL BEEN CAPTURED IN THAT SCENERIO...PASSION OR SPACE....AND IN MOST CASES, IF HANDLED THE RIGHT WAY...PASSION + SPACE(in time) = BLISS & SOME- THING OF EVERLASTING VALUE, YOU AGREE? A (10) ! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
saying NO...being true to yourself...the two toughest things on earth to do...love, nalini
Awesome poem- I really enjoyed it. The structure's easy to understand and the reader knows exactly what you're saying. It's strange sometimes how other know things about you that even you don't know. Great write! Keep up the good work. :)
Nice poem, really convenient to read, easy to understand, described good what you wanna say.
Mixed emotions over this one. Guess it is a sign of a good poem ~ something that makes one wonder. Leaving is often not easy. Sugar coated goodbyes are still goodbyes. ...so 25 years later.. did you find yourself? Or maybe that is a moot question. Odds are you had already found yourself at that very moment 25 years ago...and you knew it was time to go. If you were still truely lost, you would not have had a direction heading. Do you regret leaving? Retorical question Dee, no need to answer. Zen