Thursday, May 4, 2006

Let Me Get To Know Me Comments

Rating: 4.3

I've gotten to know you, very well,
And so you say, 'Why must you go? '

I know you love me dearly,
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Dee Daffodil
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Zen Bojczuk 26 June 2007

Mixed emotions over this one. Guess it is a sign of a good poem ~ something that makes one wonder. Leaving is often not easy. Sugar coated goodbyes are still goodbyes. ...so 25 years later.. did you find yourself? Or maybe that is a moot question. Odds are you had already found yourself at that very moment 25 years ago...and you knew it was time to go. If you were still truely lost, you would not have had a direction heading. Do you regret leaving? Retorical question Dee, no need to answer. Zen

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Barry Van Allen 11 January 2007

Dee, I am sure that you believed that when you wrote it! Flip it over though! If a guy said that to you, what would you think? And how did that work out? - - - I thought so! That ranks right up there with 'It just happenned '... when people cheat! Take some damned responsibility for what you do! Yea! , me either!

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Emily Pearl 31 July 2006

dee very catching, so i hope you don't mind me voting 10 emilyxxx

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Leigh A. Hill 11 July 2006

wow....talent is poured into this poem! nice love starr

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Brian Griffin 15 June 2006

you speak the truth. it's sad to walk away to get to know yourself, but it is imperative. brilliant poem.

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This, DD, is an exquisite mode of expressing a fundamental truth. Well done.

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David Gerardino 03 June 2006

SO TRUE, LIKE THE POEM, HAVE A GOOD IDEA, , , , , , , ,

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Krishna Dasani 27 May 2006

a tough choice to make amazingly put down in words.. superb.. krishna

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WELL DONE DEE, AS PER USUAL...HAVEN'T WE ALL BEEN CAPTURED IN THAT SCENERIO...PASSION OR SPACE....AND IN MOST CASES, IF HANDLED THE RIGHT WAY...PASSION + SPACE(in time) = BLISS & SOME- THING OF EVERLASTING VALUE, YOU AGREE? A (10) ! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Nalini Hebbar 15 May 2006

saying NO...being true to yourself...the two toughest things on earth to do...love, nalini

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trisha evensen 11 May 2006

I love this. It displays selfless love so beautifully.

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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 10 May 2006

Awesome poem- I really enjoyed it. The structure's easy to understand and the reader knows exactly what you're saying. It's strange sometimes how other know things about you that even you don't know. Great write! Keep up the good work. :)

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Duncan Wyllie 04 May 2006

Point comes across well, keep the pen flowing, Love duncan

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Kevin Deckert 04 May 2006

Nice poem, really convenient to read, easy to understand, described good what you wanna say.

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