Monday, February 18, 2019

Let Me Forget Comments

Rating: 4.8

I fall down on my knees
Stretch forth my hands
And cry out in utter despair
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Susheela Alexiose
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Aniruddha Pathak 20 February 2019

A lovely piece on loneliness, one left alone. But there's always ONE to love you. I liked what I read.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 February 2019

Let me forget the one Whom I loved so dear! Let me forget everything And not a trace remain in me Lest I die of this sorrow..........your love for the creator.... is soooo great. even when we are abandoned from a love here in this world we can always walk with him all alone. there is beauty and joy in it. it is inner joy. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 18 February 2019

Some bitter truths of life with due deliberation accepted, giving a solace to the troubles mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 February 2019

A poignant write. Very touching lines that vividly depicts loneliness. Beautifully crafted and.well executed poem.

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