Let Me Flow Comments

May be I can thrill over the sprout of new life And dance with the swaying leaves.......nice poetic expresion. A beautiful poem based on philosophy has been astutely delineated.

only by interacting can we contribute to the richness of life thanks Valsa

Oh! this is very inspiring indeed scripted with loving words laden with dews of emotions......Valsa.....amazing write .......10/10

beautiful write, very encouraging..enjoyed it

Ah yes! we all can use a shot of new birth. Especially emotionally and spiritually. When life has been stagnated for awhile it needs to be refreshed with newness. Then there will be new growth and room for improvement. Great encouragement Valsa! .

feel a cool rain again to soul to wordsMaking the arid lands wet May be I can thrill over the sprout of new life And dance with the swaying leaves

Hi, my friend Krishnakumar, Everything comes to an end once, Fearing it, why remain stagnant Greater benefit of the greater number Is preferred to the need of a few vagrant! Thanks for the comment!

When the lagoon is in flow It will soon dry and die Better slake the thirst of those Poor nomads who travel by.... Great write.........

Very insightful sentiment....let our life be active to obtain meaningful existence!

I have been stagnant Let me flow Beautiful poem inviting dynamic action to give meaning to life. Thank you.

lifes moments are subject to change, sometimes even beyond our control, a man wrapped up in himself makes a v small bundle, so its better to flow and dance and rejoice every moment.........a gud write Mam

like a barren land needs water to bloom, , we too need love in our lives to dance with the swaying leaves, , extraordinary write, , ,

Thank you Dinesh, for carrying my poem to higher dimensions than I imagined! Beautiful interpretation! !

A stagnant lagoon desiring to wet the parched landscape is analogous to a man with material wealth aspiring to spend what is in excess by him for philanthropy and charity... This lagoon flowing across in the form of a river has a better entity. Madam, do you Know the Chinese were once reported to have arrested the course of a a rogue river and converted her into a big lagoon? Value of anything lies in its utility and similarly a filthy rich man needs to be humanised. to serve others. A fine write Madam Valsa..

a beautiful poem with an extraordinary message...loved reading it..

spreading, expanding, stretching in joy revive us. the desire to be unshackled is nicely portrayed.

Very nice message in a precise note. Yes stagnancy or isolation is another form of death, there must be a dynamism...... a flow. I loved it. You may read my A misery .