Let Me Flow Poem by Valsa George

Let Me Flow

Rating: 5.0


For ages, I have been a stagnant lagoon
Plough out a canal for me
Let me flow, let some water
Seep down to the parched earth
Making the arid lands wet
May be I can thrill over the sprout of new life
And dance with the swaying leaves

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 11 January 2014

feel a cool rain again to soul to wordsMaking the arid lands wet May be I can thrill over the sprout of new life And dance with the swaying leaves

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Valsa George 10 January 2014

Hi, my friend Krishnakumar, Everything comes to an end once, Fearing it, why remain stagnant Greater benefit of the greater number Is preferred to the need of a few vagrant! Thanks for the comment!

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When the lagoon is in flow It will soon dry and die Better slake the thirst of those Poor nomads who travel by.... Great write.........

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Marvin Brato 09 January 2014

Very insightful sentiment....let our life be active to obtain meaningful existence!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 January 2014

I have been stagnant Let me flow Beautiful poem inviting dynamic action to give meaning to life. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2018

May be I can thrill over the sprout of new life And dance with the swaying leaves.......nice poetic expresion. A beautiful poem based on philosophy has been astutely delineated.

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Loke Kok Yee 08 November 2015

only by interacting can we contribute to the richness of life thanks Valsa

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 November 2014

Oh! this is very inspiring indeed scripted with loving words laden with dews of emotions......Valsa.....amazing write .......10/10

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Rubab Atwal 18 January 2014

beautiful write, very encouraging..enjoyed it

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Patricia Grantham 16 January 2014

Ah yes! we all can use a shot of new birth. Especially emotionally and spiritually. When life has been stagnated for awhile it needs to be refreshed with newness. Then there will be new growth and room for improvement. Great encouragement Valsa! .

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