Let Me Fall Under Some Natural Disaster Comments
Let me fall under some natural-disaster
the eye of a storm picks up the hereafter.
Be felled as if by a random act of god,
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A well composed poem. Congratulations being POD
Mark, wonder if not the closing couplet a contradiction to the earlier part of the poem. However enjoyed this beautifully rhyming and well written poem. Congratulations on it being chosen poem of the day! A sure 10
Thank you, Valsa for your comments the contradiction is a purposeful personal frustration relating singular to the virus.
Mark....I wonder if not the last couplet a contradiction to the previous part....! However enjoyed this beautifully rhyming and well crafted poem. Congratulations on this great poem chosen as poem of the day...! A10
Some killed by an avalanche some drown at sea Some pandemics take but please, please God, not me........ touching expression having an outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.
Thank you for your lovely comments Kamarmani I am glad you enjoyed this.
It intersperses with the sands and the stars. Amazing prayer is made for God and gaining greatness of beauty and light in life. This poem is thought provoking as well as thoughtful. Thank you very much for penning this poem! ...10 Congratulations!
A wonderful poem well written. A one of a kind thought on death. Death has its own course. It may come like a thief in the night in a way that we cannot foresee.
A thief in the night is a good description in these circumstances, thank you.
Some killed by an avalanche some drown at sea Some pandemics take but please, please God, not me...... touching concluding with outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.
Some killed by an avalanche some drown at sea Some pandemics take but please, please God, not me. Their resltless limbs, death throes..... not me please God, not me.. we all pray nowadays like this intimately to God. tony
Some killed by an avalanche some drown at sea Some pandemics take but please, please God, not me......greatly written... superb poem penned...10+....congrats let me fall yes let me fall... let me fall to rise high with the sun of panacea....
Yes, this is a poem with which most of us can identify... well crafted...
Lovely flowing and well written poem. Congratulations on Poem of The Day.
A well composed poem of the day. Congratulations on your featured piece....10++
The penultimate stanza is my favorite! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being selected as poem of the Day!
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7/18/2025 10:03:50 PM # 1.0.0
Beautifully written. The last lines add the most fun. Though we all dream of our last days and have wishes on how to die none wants to die with this virus! Also want to thank you for your recent comment on my new poem Crossing The Bridge.