Saturday, June 15, 2013

Let Me End This Comments

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Let me end this,
It is not what I had in mind.
End it? Not like this
But how can I use my mind?
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Musa Ndhlovu
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James Mclain 28 June 2013

It is good and sad to feel the way you felt at the time. Marchs on as do you. She is as the sky. You as the cloudless top....iip

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Payal Parande 15 June 2013

love is the only act which is selfless two people in love give and never ask anything in return....now keep that in your mind and put yourself in her shoes.you'll get your answer a great write sir

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Gajanan Mishra 15 June 2013

move on, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment,

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Musa Ndhlovu

Musa Ndhlovu

SOUTH AFRICA MPUMALANGA
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