Let Me Drink Life With You Poem by Aqua Flower

Let Me Drink Life With You

Rating: 5.0


Let me drink life with you
quenching our thirst until we are through
I am always thirsty for the beauty
blue skies don't hide forever
Never say never
for I have dream
that is calling me every day
it has your name in it
this dream keeps my skies from turning gray
I have dream
a dream of you and I
holding hands under the moonlit sky
I have a dream of going to bed together
under the sheets caressing and nestling
strong arms are a blessing
to keep me comforted and secure
to eradicate my thirst
I have a dream our love will one day be first
let me drink life with you
I will give you a life you never knew

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Sunday, August 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming,life,longing,love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 27 August 2018

the last two lines, let me drink life with you I will give you a life you never knew are a really strong ending. A 10.

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Aqua Flower 05 May 2020

Thank you. I never sent it to one I love. I probably should have.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2018

Let me drink life with you quenching our thirst until we are through I am always thirsty for the beauty blue skies don't hide forever........interesting beginning. The concluding is impressive.A beautiful poem on love and life nicely executed.10

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Rini shibu 26 August 2018

Beautiful and Romantic..nicely inscribed

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Aqua Flower 26 August 2018

Thank you Rini, your comments make me feel happy!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2018

A beautiful poem of love. Passionate and heartwarming. For I have a dream...that is calling me everyday It has your name in it.... lovely lines from a marvelous poem.10

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Aqua Flower 26 August 2018

Thank you for this lovely comment! I appreciate the high rating also! Warmly received, Aqua

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