Thursday, December 11, 2014

Let Me Die A Little Comments

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Let me die a little—slowly and slowly,
Many a time escaped narrowly -so narrowly
I am a Dove, a Vulture and well cultured,
The holy heart has been captured,
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 December 2014

This is honestly very amazing write with full of insights..............wonderful poetry

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Ramesh Rai 14 December 2014

We allare dying slowly in this well cultured society and every timewe are narrowly escaped..A Very deep and powetful write.

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Salini Nair 12 December 2014

I am faithless like cat that sounds Mew, I am going to clean all with morning dew, ..............nice lines

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 11 December 2014

Let me die a little slowly and slowly is really wonderful poem beautiful crafted and drafted that speak about truth. Life gains pain and its just like death of little, little. Wonderful really. All sins a man is going clean while watches morning in dew makes this special definitely.

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