Let Me Close My Eyes Comments

shadows of my life pass before me beautiful lines; sometimes we need to live today, for tomorrow, in hopes and dreams, small goals, small accomplishments. The past we cannot change, so why hang ourselves over it. Remember The past is a foreign country, things were done differently there. Make peace with the past, let it be. Your friend Terence.

Welcome to our writing community- a deep and substansil written lamentation-write on

This is lovely King - knew your poems would get better.

No transformation is easy, but well worth the effort. Good poem

Oh, now I`m almost in tears, this is a surprise but so sad, a very clever write, (hope your servant didn`t pen it for you) ., Long live the King.....