Tuesday, August 8, 2017

Let Me Burn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the tree of God
I am not sinful or sinless.
But if doomed, I am to die.
Can I borrow your lips?
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Mark Heathcote
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Shakil Ahmed 08 August 2017

a wonderful poem with a nice ending, the entire poem is compose with a real artistic touch, thanks for sharing.

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Mark Heathcote 08 August 2017

Thank you, Shakil Ahmed, for a very pleasing review of this poem in your thoughts it is much appreciated.

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Gurleen Kaur Narang 08 August 2017

Wonderful poem with a catchy title.Emotions depicted in the purest way.10++++

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Mark Heathcote 08 August 2017

I am glad you receive it so well & thank you for your comment.

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