Thursday, May 30, 2013

Let Me Breathe Comments

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Let’s light candles into the heart of darken hut
Wait, it is made of sandal, door, don’t thud, shut
All blinded with thunder, a cloud of blunder
A dark shadow round us with a tam o ‘shanter
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Heather Wilkins 09 June 2013

we will rise again. this is something noone can stop. good write

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Wahab Abdul 02 June 2013

the mantra of the poem ''With the slogan, we will be rise again we will wise again, we will rise again ''..... a robust hope expressed in the poem.. so lovely.. like it..bro 8

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Naison Nyaunzwi 02 June 2013

I love this one, this is one great poem i ever read

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David Wood 01 June 2013

We will rise again, full of hope. A lovely poem Aftab.

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Aldrich Suarez 31 May 2013

being spilled by lot of sounds.... yes you will rise again, if you're willing to do it so..

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