Friday, August 24, 2012

Let Me Be Your Guiding Star! Comments

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Let me out a shriek
Of, my youngers, being pleased
For the long run of my Zeros!
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Eindaray Kyaw
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Unwritten Soul 28 August 2012

This is a great poem for your two brothers, with care and hope you delight them in very nice words arrangement...keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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Dave Walker 25 August 2012

A beautiful poem, like it.

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Heather Wilson 25 August 2012

How nice to see a sister caring about her two younger brothers so much, a lovely poem.

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Eindaray Kyaw

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