If you lose
your color
your spark
your magic
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It is when... “...you lose Your colour Your spark Your magic Your charm”..... that you need a friend, if not for anything else, just to lean on his/her shoulders and weep... Every friendship is worth the name, only if we imbibe this quality....
Sorry, the last line is: Mera dar khula hain, khula hi rahega tumhare liye....
Hi Nosheen, Wonderful poem, A tribute, ode to friendship, camaraderie... Just reminded me of the evergreen song rendered in the immortal voice of Great Mukesh, in Purab Aur Paschim.... Koyee jab tumhara hruday thod de Tadapta hua jab koyee jhod de Tab tum mere paaz aanaa priye Mera dil khula hain, khula hi rahega Tumhare liye...... A billion tens for this lovely poem....
If one finds a true friend, then one has found one of the greatest treasures this world offers, a very warm poem indeed!
A wonderful ode to friendship! Two sturdy oaks I mean, which side by side, Withstand the winter's storm, And spite of wind and tide, Grow up the meadow's pride, For both are strong. Above they barely touch, but undermined Down to their deepest source, Admiring you shall find Their roots are intertwined Insep'rably. - Thoreau
I'll hear your silent tears I'll heal your invisible scar , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , Let me be your friend......an impressive expression from the heart in which friendship is a divine message. Beautiful poem nicely executed. A 10
A wonderful poem in the chapter of friendship! Extremely well penned.....................10
Such a lovely poem, so tender and sweet! This, indeed, is true friendship. To be there for your friend when the whole world rejects. Classic poem, Nosheen that deserves full marks.