Monday, December 22, 2014

Let Me Be With My Conscience Comments

Rating: 4.9

Let me listen and hear my conscience,
O! Vice, the wretched one.
Your clutches seem to be strong,
But verily with you is a loss.
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti
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Souren Mondal 30 November 2015

A old saying has that we have both virtues and vices in us, but it is upto us to choose the virtues and ditch the vices. A very well written poem from you Abdulrazak. It shows how passionate you are about having the right conscience.. If only we had a world where people had some respect for humanity and a proper conscience we might have been saved from the horrors of war, murders, rape, destruction, and all such sick cruelty.. Simple yet thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing brother.10 points from me. Your simplicity is wonderful..

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 October 2015

My conscience is my God so let me be with it through, come good or bad life will have no sweat and no trouble so long as I cling to it........very well crafted.......10

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Kinyua Karanja 23 September 2015

A lyric and very educating, I like this.

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Melvina Germain 20 September 2015

One may be suffering inwardly but once they recognize such they will survive it...Excellent poem.....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2015

So nice poem.. i credit with 10 In normal ways Let us think in different way Leave it totally in self control But respond to conscience call It may be wrong call too But be true That shall wake your inner urge And force later on to purge

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 18 September 2015

A fine verse...Be strong, you are good! Dorothy A. Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 September 2015

'Let me hop and dance with my conscience'! To dig deep into the 'consciousness' one has to search and search until we reach the innermost core of the heart! Once you realise your own true nature you have crossed all barriers. You are in the kingdom of God!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2015

Great write indicating consciousness among self and others. Thanks for sharing. .......10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2015

Great write indicating consciousness for self and others. Thanks for sharing. ......10

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Melvina Germain 11 August 2015

If one would learn to listen intently to their conscience they would save themselves a lot of pain. This poem shows great wisdom...Speaking primarily of self but still sharing abundantly with the world.....

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James Mclain 10 August 2015

Knowing what one hears inside the head forces a choice that on hears great poem thank you clear.. iip

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Savita Tyagi 25 July 2015

Wonderful poem. A constant struggle goes on with in ourself and and our conscience is always our guide. Loved the poem. Keep writing and sharing your wonderful gift.

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Bharati Nayak 15 July 2015

Let me walk and stroll with my conscience- - -Really our conscience is our real guide.Nice poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Conscience that is the soul searching experience humans consider important and here poet writes a good poem and likes it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 July 2015

Let me hop and dance with my conscience! With the muse of love and life; where nature leads the way. Nice work.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 May 2015

Thoughtful write. If one could read inner conscience then, one can surely come out of any pains, any habits. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Samkelo Dlamini 14 April 2015

well written and meaningful! !

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Chinedu Dike 13 April 2015

A good conscience is a continued celebration. A nice piece of poetry well penned with insight. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 December 2014

A self guidance but a message for others as well.............10

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Rajnish Manga 23 December 2014

In the face of so much negativity all around, one needs to have a firm conviction to counter these forces as shown in the poem which makes it extraordinary.

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