Friday, July 25, 2014

Let Me Be The One Comments

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When life hands you so much sorrow and pain,
And takes so much with little to gain,
You're like a train that somehow left the track,
Can we ever get the good times back?
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Alan W. Jankowski
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F J Thomas 30 July 2014

:) Even if one's childhood wasn't so great you make one yearn for easier times Alan. Your ending brought it home; offering to be the one to make things better...beautiful.

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Alan W. Jankowski

Alan W. Jankowski

Perth Amboy, New Jersey
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