Let Me Be Free Comments

Golly how sucking this all issue seem When I never saw an awakening seed Sheepishly even in dreams I struggle I battle To loosen this tightening horse with saddle Indeed in life, it is not uncommon to find yourself in a pain that is so difficult to let go. It is normal and part of our human nature. Some pains can be so possessing to the extent of dominating your dreams and thoughts. However, life is too short for one to remain perpetually in pain, life must move on regardless of every pain. I love the structure of this poem, brilliant diction and appealing in theme. Well done!