Monday, February 20, 2012

Let Me Be Comments

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Please let me be with the rain
To hide the tears dripping down my face
Let me befriend the thunder
So it can drown my screams
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Laila Gabanes
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Bri Edwards 23 November 2013

i added this to MyPoemList. what a coincidence....i just corrected another poet (from europe i think) on his spelling of breath [sic]; i've made the same mistake, not long ago! breathe. :) let me able to feel my face............looks like a word is missing here :) i especially enjoyed the first and last stanzas. thanks for sharing.

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