Thursday, November 12, 2009

# # Let Me Be.... Comments

Rating: 3.5

a cactus or a flower
let me be whatever
let me be what i am
let me seem what i am
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Sandra Fowler 26 November 2009

And you have become so wonderfully you in your profound poems. Take care. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Kesav Easwaran 26 November 2009

The theme of the poem is related to dejection and wounded pride and of covering them up with nonchalance and confidence...good expressive write...10

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Miriam Maia Padua 24 November 2009

meaningful Sam...a plead for self identity a cactus or a flower...strong or fragile...lovable or not... may we be ourselves..to live not within the expectations of others... i love the thoughts, Sam lovelots, Maia

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Meggie Gultiano 23 November 2009

a nice write, Sam..I just love this

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Mamta Agarwal 21 November 2009

a flower and cactus are both His creation. we humans also are multifaceted. it requires courage to stand for your convictions. oh yes, we need to live and let live. let me be its a plea don't you see I want to be free just let me be... Mamta

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Mamta Agarwal 21 November 2009

a flower and cactus are both His creation. we humans also are multifaceted. it requires courage to stand for your convictions. oh yes, we need to live and let live. let me be its a plea don't you see I want to be free just let me be... Mamta

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Patti Masterman 19 November 2009

I like the comparison between cactus and flower. A flower is perceived as beautiful, useful, good; while a cactus is maybe seen to not have much beauty, use or worth, so the poem is saying, good or bad, let whatever is just be what it is (and also in a manner of saying; the value that men give to things is not the eternal value..cactus exists because they have a place here, along with flowers, whatever and in spite of what men might have to say about it)

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Indira Babbellapati 18 November 2009

LET ME BE....? ? ? all the best!

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Maitreyee Joshi 18 November 2009

however intensly you may feel, they will try their level best not to let u be what u are.i think, sam, life is a fight, a struggle to be yourselves against all odds.

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 15 November 2009

Yes, 'let me be what i am' and be accepted for what I am! ! ! The worst part is, we are often victims of rash censure! ! ! I read this poem right when it was just what I needed at the moment sir!

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Carol Gall 12 November 2009

always be who you ae 10

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Joseph Poewhit 12 November 2009

All you can be is what GOD created

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