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First things first, you composed a refrain of breathtaking beauty, the epitome of a dream of bliss which can protect us from the harsh, painful realities of waking consciousness. I'm not sure how many times the refrain appeared, but every time I read it complete with increasing delight. It's true. I never skipped a line or breezed through by skimming it. No way! For my first encounter with your PROMETHEUS poem, the refrain took all of my attention. I'll go back to it for the main story. Check out my recent WINGS AND ARROWS, Greek myth as well - the love affair of Venus and Adonis, a subject taken by a very young William Shakespeare, and now ME! !