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Some very good ideas, if reworked would be an outstanding piece.

Beautiful write. Enjoyed it. Very much.

Who lives in the sky is really unreliable. good write. I like it.

Wonderful poem Garreth, a much deserved poem for poem of the day. I especially enjoyed the nice easy flow. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Well done Garreth, a nature voice!

Because its a work of heart it brilliantly qualifies as a work of art. Your phrase past falls off the face of the clock, reminded me of Salvador Dalis paintings.

like your use of words and rhythm :)

I love everything about it because it is written with your heart, every feeling so beautifully expressed with such fantastic flow, it leaves me in a place where I, let me! beautiful write Gareth.

I dont see the point in this (the past falls away at the face of the clock as the sand washes off the edge of the rock time as it stands is washed away in the sand or is it dwelling inside of your head if you dont know its in the palm of your hands you might already be dead And this many a wise man from his book he has read the words of another that ring in his head many a man has lost his soul to the wind many a man more perfect has sinned) Being in the poem it does not go with the other parts of the poem and throws the rythom off. Also you should put withstand the heat not stand the heat, if you put stand the heat it doesnt really make that much sense. Everything else i thought was fine and i like the rythm of the poem when i skip the two big sections,

That was a very good write :) I really enjoyed it :) Thanks for the lovely reading. The only advice I could give for this poem really would just treat your poems as a crystal. Cut that crystal and polish that crystal accordingly. Remember this crystal has been sent to you because it trusts you. Make sure your crystal is perfect. Make sure you know everything about your crystal. For example I memorise mine off by heart before I publish them. And just the syllabic structure again - it makes it harder to find words but you are a great poet and you can find them. Believe in your crystal my friend! ! Sincerely, Williams, T.

Wow, this is fantastic. A beautiful poem about finding strength within yourself, not god or anyone else for that matter. I love it.

A very edgy poem it comes across like a song. Good use of words and rhyme which make this a very good poem indeed!

Great shape and nicely written! ! ..Good stuff!

let be... i was hooked on this poem like a bass on a line. really amazing poem. real point. great your a great poet you truly are really talented, keep it up! :)

A very impressive and well penned poem that clearly shows your great TALENT and creative imagination! This poem reminds me of one I wrote some time ago, also with the same title: LET I BE. I hope if time permits you read and enjoy it! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York! ...